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September 7, 2004

The Touch -- Colleen McCullough

coverMcCullough has produced some very thoughtful work in the past. Tim and An Indecent Obsession are novels that deal with difficult subject matter deftly and with insight, but this novel doesn't work for me, at all. It is poorly done soap opera, trite, predictable, and just plain unbelievable for the most part. The dialogue is often so stilted that I was embarrassed by it.

The story concerns Elizabeth, who at age sixteen is sent from Scotland to Australia to marry a cousin twenty years her senior, one who has made a fortune for himself in mining and engineering. She takes an instant dislike to him, which carries over to their sex life. Her dislike of sex is so extreme that I wondered, for a short time, if McCullough was going to deal with the matter of lesbianism in the late 19th century. That would have been interesting, at least. Instead Elizabeth spends ten years bearing two daughters, learning how to spend money, and making friends with her husband's business partner and long-time lover, Ruby, all the while avoiding him. Alex is a man of his place and time -- less than enlightened, fixed in his ideas, controlling. He plans for his first daughter (who is speaking, unbelievably, in complex sentences with subordinate clauses at age eleven months) to marry Ruby's son by a Chinese prince when he (Lee) comes back from being educated in England.

The fact that Elizabeth and Lee will fall in love is telegraphed early and often, and thus the story has to devolve into a parody of itself. Which is really too bad. I had hopes for this novel, but I found myself speed reading to get it over with. I have given it one star because McCullough does do her research, as always, and provides great period detail.

White Doves at Morning -- James Lee Burke ****+

This might best be called creative non-fiction, as Burke has written a novelized version of his own family history and an ancestor, Willie Burke, the son of Irish immigrants who settled in New Iberia, Louisiana. Willie Burke -- impulsive and idealistic -- is drawn into the Civil War with his best friends, despite his doubts about the cause and his dislike of slavery. The story moves back and forth between his experiences (including the bloody battle at Shiloh) and what's going on in New Iberia, where women and a few men who have evaded fighting for one reason or another continue to fight wars of their own. Abigail Dowling, a nurse from Boston, is an abolitionist who is not well loved by the local patriarchy, but she struggles to carry on. The pivotal character is a slave called Flower, the daughter of a slave woman and the plantation owner. Flower's struggle to maintain some semblance of dignity and independence (from her father/owner as well as from the abolitionists) is sensitively portrayed, without sliding into the realm of the sentimental.

I have a low tolerance for Civil War novels; I think I overdosed on them some years ago, and so it takes an unusual story to really capture my attention. This one did, although I will also say that I wonder how far Burke went in his fictionalization and idealization of an ancestor with such enlightened sensibilities.

Taking Liberties -- Diana Norman ****+

This novel is a sequel to Norman's A Catch of Consequence, previously reviewed here. We pick up the story of Makepeace Burke's life, and find that she hasn't got any more mellow with age; she's driven, and she drives everyone around her, though with a basic goodness of heart and the best of intentions. In this novel she sets out to find her eleven year old daughter, who was on board an American ship sunk by the British (this is the War of 1812, and sea travel is dangerous). At the same time a new character -- Lady Diana Stacpole, recently widowed and glad to be free of a cruel husband of twenty years -- is looking for the son of an old friend, a sailor who was taken prisoner from the same ship that carried Makepeace's daughter. These two women could hardly be more different, and in fact they rub each other the wrong way immediately. There's considerable humor here, and a lot of insight about the way women get along, or fail to.

Beyond the wonderful character development, there's a lot of plot: kidnappings, pirates, smugglers, chase scenes, prison breaks. I love complex plots, but here I had the sense that Norman was sometimes juggling too many eggs at once (and who am I to say something like this, given the multiple, interwoven plots of my own books? And yet, that's how I see it.)

All in all this is an excellent novel with great characters who find their way through a thicket of challenges to come out changed to a lesser degree (Makepeace) or a greater one (Diana). It's huge fun, and very engaging.

Vanity Fair -- screenplay by M Faulk & J Fellowes **

See this movie for the wonderful costumes, fantastic historical detail, and photography. See if it you like Reese Witherspoon; see it for the other beautiful people. Don't see it for the acting, which is barely adequate in the best cases and overblown in the worst (Gabriel Byrne, what happened?). Absolutely do not see it for the plot, which sags in the middle like a mattress in a by-the-hour-motel. I don't know where the blame lies (Mira Nair, the director, has done some great work in the past), but that doesn't really matter. The bottom line is, there's no energy, no wit, and no reason to see what should have been an insightful social commentary but ended up a soggy romance.

what to read

I'll be doing book signings/readings for Fire Along the Sky later this month, for anybody who might be in the area: on Monday, September 20 (7:30 pm) at Village Books in Bellingham; and on Wednesday, September 22 (7:00 pm) at Third Place Books in Lake Forest Park.

Usually I read for about a half hour and then take questions. I have no idea yet what passage I'm going to read, and I'd be open to any suggestions y'all may have.

Seattle Times review

It's a good one. Here's the link, and the review too:
Great news for Sara Donati fans: It is time once more to immerse yourself in her richly imagined world. It's been two long years since "Lake in the Clouds," the third novel in her Wilderness series about frontier life in upstate New York (beginning with "Into the Wilderness"). Now the fourth book, "Fire Along the Sky," advances the fortunes and trials of the Bonner family and their friends -- and enemies -- as the War of 1812 threatens all they hold dear.

In the new book by Donati (the pen name of Bellingham resident Rosina Lippi), the focus shifts from the heads of the Bonner clan (Nathaniel, a famous hunter, and his strong-willed wife, Elizabeth, a teacher) to the younger generation. It's a complicated cast of characters. Nathaniel has fathered five children by three women; the youngest three of the five children are Elizabeth's. Then there are all the subsidiary characters, most of them familiar from previous novels in the series (Donati gives a two-page list of the primary characters as a preface).

Do you need to know the previous books in order to enjoy "Fire Along the Sky"? It's probably not necessary -- but the more you know about Donati's world, the better you understand the complicated motivation, history and interaction of these well-drawn characters. References to earlier betrayals, romances, disagreements and disasters will strike a chord in the longtime Donati fan that may be less resonant in first-timers.

There's a lot to enjoy here. Donati keeps the plot moving at a terrific pace; there are deadly dangers, harrowing journeys, tense confrontations, life-and-death struggles. The day-to-day minutiae of frontier housekeeping and provisioning are regularly jolted with shocks of all kinds: warfare, abduction, drowning, unexpected pregnancy, violent death.

Her characters compel the reader's attention. In the opening pages, the newly widowed Scottish noblewomen Lady Jennet voyages to Montreal in quest of young Luke Bonner, the man she originally wanted to marry. Then Luke's half-sister (and half-Mohawk) Hannah returns after a long absence -- without her husband or her son. It takes most of the book to discover what has happened to them, and why Hannah, a talented healer, is unable to speak about the tragedies that have befallen her family.

Then there are the Bonner twins, Daniel and Lily, who spend much of the novel estranged from each other: Daniel wants to go off to war but is seriously wounded and imprisoned in a Canadian stockade. Lily is a gifted artist who doesn't always make wise personal choices; she is in love with a married man who is unworthy of her.

And there are fascinating villains. Jemima Kuick, a viciously amoral woman who wreaked considerable havoc in earlier books, returns for a stunning blow against the little society of Paradise. This character just might be Donati's argument for the existence of absolute evil; Jemima is so willfully horrible that she's too good to kill off (and Donati seems to be positioning her for a return in a subsequent installment of this saga).

Donati's strong women characters are the heart of her books. They don't just sit around and stir the gruel or knit the socks. They go charging off to infiltrate an enemy camp, operate on wounded soldiers, rescue kidnapped hostages. They speak their mind, often so bluntly that it's a wonder there wasn't more warfare on the frontier. Young girls or wise octogenarians, these are characters that tug at the reader's imagination. After four "Wilderness" books, these women seem as real as your own neighbors.

Melinda Bargreen is The Seattle Times' classical-music critic.